Comments : The Heart Library

  • 2 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    An excellent piece. Nice rhyming and metaphors. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes Milly x

    • 2 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Milly it's lovely to see you back here :-) Thanks so much for your lovely comments and for the nomination, I really appreciate it! :-) x
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  • 2 years ago

    by Walter

    Wonderful write and flow Kitty and I love the metaphors in this. I'm glad to hear your story is continuing and look forwards to a happy ending x

    • 2 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw, thanks so much Walter ... the story continues indeed ;-) x
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  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Very good, Kitty, in every sense of the word.

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 2 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Ben, I'm glad you enjoyed it :-) x
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  • 2 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This struck a real chord with me and I'm glad to see it nominated that's for sure

    • 2 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Lovely comments Em, thanks so much :-) x
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  • 2 years ago

    by Ya----Na

    Kitty never stop looking for the adventures and you know my best wishes are always with you dear friend. Nicely rhymed.

    • 2 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Shane ... I'm so ready for the next chapter! :-) x
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  • 2 years ago

    by Lost One

    This flows so well, from line to line, and stanza to stanza. And the metaphorical book! Just beautiful.

    • 2 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Lovely comments Tony, thanks so much :-) x
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  • 2 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Yes! Definitely this! I love it! Well done Kitty.
    Much love, Catherine x

  • 2 years ago

    by Michael

    Brilliant Kitty
    Really well written and a great story.

    Much love
    M :)x

  • 2 years ago

    by Nee

    Kitty, brilliant write!! Books and libraries in a poem, that's earthly heaven for me!

    • 2 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks so much Nee .... libraries are one of my fave smells! :-) x
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  • 2 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This is something quite special in my eyes

    Emotions tied in to literature is so symbolic of what we do so so often. Yet not quite like this.

    Often I will see similarities in poems by different people and yet they are all unique. This takes unique to a whole new level.

    I felt it to be a sad write but it's quite clear the book is far from finished.

    They rhyming is pretty dam good, although one bit caused a little glitch in my flow but so minimally so it did not detract from the poem,

    All in all a fantastic heart felt piece

    Regards

    Craig x

    • 2 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Wow Craig, such lovely comments, like a big hug! Thank you x
      Let me know which bit glitched so I can have a look :-) x
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  • 2 years ago

    by Someone Invisible

    The image this poem first envoked was kind of delicate and soft and innocent. And slowly, with great flow, it sparked with anger and a sense of injustice. Idk, the feeling at the end is a good one though; a strong recovery. A sturdy mindframe. I read it and saw it play out in my mind like a rolodex of images and short soundless clips. And maybe Im just in a super emotional state right now but I kinda wanted to cry because...I mean, Gosh....this is always a massive fear of mine. Kinda dumb to fear something thats inevitable but hey, emotions dont always make sense. Im super bad at writing these so I usually just aviod it altogether but I honestly really like this piece. I had to come back to the site after I closed it out just to read it cause the title alone drew me in. Favourited. <3

    • 2 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      S I, thank you so very much for taking the time to write such wonderful comments, it's hugely appreciated. x I guess falling in love can only go one of two ways; you either stay in love, or you don't. Despite all the pain and heartache, (which I'm glad I'm able to express through my poems) I'm still a believer, and the saying: "better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all" still feels true for me. I'll pick myself up, dust myself off, and start again ... it's a new chapter and a new adventure.
      All the very best my lovely :-) x
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  • 2 years ago

    by Aabraham Anyadike

    still cant find a way of describing the imagery in this buts its beyond saying wow, this is fascinating and well constructed. I love u dearie

    • 2 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Oh what lovely comments Aabraham, I really appreciate it. Thank you :-) x
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  • 2 years ago

    by P o e m e l o

    I really commend the imagery and I learn alot from this. The message is so clear to me. I can relate to your poem.

    • 2 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Thanks for your lovely comments Poemelo :-) x
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