An excellent piece. Nice rhyming and metaphors. A most enjoyable read. Best wishes Milly x

Wonderful write and flow Kitty and I love the metaphors in this. I'm glad to hear your story is continuing and look forwards to a happy ending x

Very good, Kitty, in every sense of the word.

All the best,

Ben

This struck a real chord with me and I'm glad to see it nominated that's for sure

Kitty never stop looking for the adventures and you know my best wishes are always with you dear friend. Nicely rhymed.

This flows so well, from line to line, and stanza to stanza. And the metaphorical book! Just beautiful.

Yes! Definitely this! I love it! Well done Kitty.
Much love, Catherine x

Brilliant Kitty
Really well written and a great story.

Much love
M :)x

Kitty, brilliant write!! Books and libraries in a poem, that's earthly heaven for me!

This is something quite special in my eyes

Emotions tied in to literature is so symbolic of what we do so so often. Yet not quite like this.

Often I will see similarities in poems by different people and yet they are all unique. This takes unique to a whole new level.

I felt it to be a sad write but it's quite clear the book is far from finished.

They rhyming is pretty dam good, although one bit caused a little glitch in my flow but so minimally so it did not detract from the poem,

All in all a fantastic heart felt piece

Regards

Craig x

The image this poem first envoked was kind of delicate and soft and innocent. And slowly, with great flow, it sparked with anger and a sense of injustice. Idk, the feeling at the end is a good one though; a strong recovery. A sturdy mindframe. I read it and saw it play out in my mind like a rolodex of images and short soundless clips. And maybe Im just in a super emotional state right now but I kinda wanted to cry because...I mean, Gosh....this is always a massive fear of mine. Kinda dumb to fear something thats inevitable but hey, emotions dont always make sense. Im super bad at writing these so I usually just aviod it altogether but I honestly really like this piece. I had to come back to the site after I closed it out just to read it cause the title alone drew me in. Favourited. <3

still cant find a way of describing the imagery in this buts its beyond saying wow, this is fascinating and well constructed. I love u dearie

I really commend the imagery and I learn alot from this. The message is so clear to me. I can relate to your poem.