ramblings (haiku)

by Mr. Darcy   Apr 11, 2018



hear those birds singing
in the ripening treetops

sharing Springtime joy

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- Mr. Darcy
© 2018

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  • 5 years ago

    by Jamie

    I enjoyed the serene and beautiful setting the poem pictures, but this also made me laugh because of the title. When I hear the word rambling, I picture a person going off on a speaking tangent and everyone looking at them like they are the craziest people in the world.

    So perhaps the title is symbolic to a person slowing going insane waking up to the sound of birds singing before the sun has a chance to wake. But I also picture the birds singing about nothing at all. And that can definitely be seen as rambling. Or

    This poem could be just as it says, spring time has just arrived and the birds are coming back from their winter hibernation. Spring is not totally in full bloom but the sunshine is high in the sky. Either way beautiful image poem.

    • 5 years ago

      by Mr. Darcy

      Spring seems a distant dream now. Thanks, Jamie for bringing this season back for me.
      Take care

  • 5 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    I woke up to birds chirping this morning it's definitely getting brighter and nothing beats that sound. Fabulous imagery as always

  • 5 years ago

    by Michael

    Wonderful Mr D..
    a piece budding with warmth ;)

    M

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    thanks all - the weather on the south coast today is positively Sprouting with springtime magic.

  • 5 years ago

    by Brenda

    Love this Michael! On my way to work this morning it was snowing....but I hope out hope lol

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