Mark,

Again you shine through with such delicate imagery and art. A lovely piece of writing fella
M:)

Just lovely! I really enjoyed reading this! The imagery is really wonderful! The rhymes are also great! Would have nominated it if Michael didn't. Haha.

--- MKKK

Marky - I also would have nominated if Michael didnt. this is wonderful.
Fantastic rhyming throughout.

Well done

Loved this excellent piece full of strong imagery and emotion. Glad to see it nominated. Milly x

Just beautiful the image is. Excellent

Congratulations :)

Thankyou for your comments poets!

Judge's Comment

The imagery in this poem is just phenomenal and it was only enhanced by Mark's skillful use of diction. The abab rhyme scheme really worked here and, like the high seas depicted, flowed from beginning to end.