Comments : Six Years

  • 9 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Nominated, for no other reason than the delicately written sadness that oozes from this piece of writing.

  • 9 months ago

    by BOB GALLO

    You feel that coldness in the middle of all those wars and bombs, grenades and cartridge's blast, the way I feel lonely in the presence of others. it is an ironic world.
    Touchin like always.

  • 9 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Glad to see this nominated.. so sad, grief sure never leaves us does it, not does it ease, we just learn coping mechanisms in my humble opinion. Hugs, take care x

  • 9 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loss if one you love especially a parent leaves a huge hole in our lives. A meloncoly piece that portrays very well loss and pain. Glad to see it nominated. Milly x

  • 9 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Heart-wrenching piece, dear friend. I hope you find warmth in his memory and name, keeping them close.

    Lots of love
    ~MA

  • 9 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    Heartbreaking, to lose a parent, loved one is tear gripping and one never loses the pain but to write
    with such soft elegance and expression is just powerful to the reader. This is beautiful and sorrowful
    poem. Just lovely.

  • 9 months ago

    by Jamie

    Congrats on the win

  • 9 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Judging comment: six Years by nourayasmine points 10 - Although this is a very sad piece the imagery within it made me ponder about it since the moment I read it which is one of the reasons I'm giving my 10 points.

  • 9 months ago

    by Daniel

    Stunning poetry, Noura. The final line is so personal, and touching. Speech really gives meaning to a piece, and leaves a bittersweet image of comfort taken away. Lovely

  • My words offend the power of yours. I am honored to have seen into your soul. Noura be blessed always my dearest sister