Beautifully written, nicely rhymed and flows like water. Nominated!

AAAA rhyming schemes are incredibly difficult because they’re so restrictive. I think you have a strong piece overall but there are some stanzas that suffer a little due to some forced rhymes. I enjoyed the meaning behind the poem - it’s uplifting with a solid flow :)

I just absolutely loved this delightful piece and after just the first couple of stanzas knew I would like to nominate it but beaten to the post by Brenda. Great little piece. Milly x

Life just ebbs and flows,
Yet they focus on the throes,
Losing sight of what matters most,
To LIVE the life you compose.

Well penned along with good rhythm and a beautiful message.

Flows so freely, great piece!