Wow I have never seen so many adjectives in one prolonged sentence, filled with such intense raw emotion, all because, of the raw emotion. The word welcome in the end seems very personal to me, which is good, therapeutic but hard for spectator like me to relate with. I mean it is healthy to write like this, for your own soul sometimes, not for the audience.
I wonder, you are such a good writer, why don't you grace us with more. You know you are special.

my praise for this poem rises like a supporting sea lifting a boat full of people, high with heady adventures in their expansive minds.

Lovely work. x

Glad to see this nominated, Meena.

Soulful indeed. There is so much hurt that is aching to be let out. Even if we can't remove all the pain, we must keep going.

Thinking of you, dear friend <3

A soulful piece that shrieks of struggled pain. The visuals are superb and rip at the heart. Milly x

Oh Meena, this is gut wrenching. So much pain in this write...hugs-

A beautifully written piece Meena, love the style here, M :)x

A beautiful piece, tears can’t wash the pain away or cleanse the stain that remains, but it would be nice if once the tears stopped all was over with, but it never is.