Comments : ....just once

  • 4 months ago

    by BOB GALLO

    Wow I have never seen so many adjectives in one prolonged sentence, filled with such intense raw emotion, all because, of the raw emotion. The word welcome in the end seems very personal to me, which is good, therapeutic but hard for spectator like me to relate with. I mean it is healthy to write like this, for your own soul sometimes, not for the audience.
    I wonder, you are such a good writer, why don't you grace us with more. You know you are special.

  • 4 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    my praise for this poem rises like a supporting sea lifting a boat full of people, high with heady adventures in their expansive minds.

    Lovely work. x

  • 4 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Glad to see this nominated, Meena.

  • 4 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Soulful indeed. There is so much hurt that is aching to be let out. Even if we can't remove all the pain, we must keep going.

    Thinking of you, dear friend <3

  • 4 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A soulful piece that shrieks of struggled pain. The visuals are superb and rip at the heart. Milly x

  • 4 months ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Meena, this is gut wrenching. So much pain in this write...hugs-

  • 4 months ago

    by Michael

    A beautifully written piece Meena, love the style here, M :)x

  • 4 months ago

    by William Mae

    A beautiful piece, tears can’t wash the pain away or cleanse the stain that remains, but it would be nice if once the tears stopped all was over with, but it never is.