Drown (Acrostic + Cinquain)

by stormingdance (Lessa)   Jan 26, 2019


Darkness
Reveal the light
Of hope before vacant
Wars consume me, consume my soul---
Night falls

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Finally fixing a previous poem.

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  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A serene view of drowning gives a more peaceful way of dying. An initial glimmer of hope that finally succumbs and gives into the inevitability of it. Milly x

  • 5 years ago

    by Star

    This has a deep meaning, in my opinion. The cinquain style fits the poem content really well. The idea, the thought, the feeling keeps expanding, and then night falls; wrapping it beautifully.