How is that you describe what is often indescribable? These moments where it's like our bones ache and we can't quite find that peace, that perfected moment of repose, and we just wait.... wait for an action or for time to pass or to feel something different. |
by RM
Thank you MA :) <3 |
by Michael
Rania, |
by Em (marmite)
I have no words for this but I'm so pleased to see it nominated |
by Ya----Na
Only light moved and me too by these beautiful words. |
by RM
Thank you all for your comments :) <3 |
by Zia Mikaela
i can relate to a certain degree. This is so magnificently portrayed. Keep it up! |
by Ben Pickard
I love this, Rania. My only suggestion would be a single dash instead of a comma after 'I paused for a moment' in line two as a comma doesn't serve up the length of pause I believe you are after. eg, 'I paused for a moment - longer than a moment'. |
by RM
Thank you Ben and Zia for your comments and for reading the poem! <3 |
by Meena Krish
I liked the imagery or should I say the scene |
The images I had from this piece blew my mind .. I froze while reading it ... |
by RM
Thank you for your kind words! |
I havent read an english poem.so beautifully penned for a long time. |