Comments : something inside so strong (octave)

  • 4 months ago

    by Michael

    A very nice form Mr D, with a nice story to boot! Not easy to do, but you have done this well indeed :) M

  • 4 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I love that perpetual promise here and the steadfastness of your words. Happy to see this nominated!

  • 4 months ago

    by Brenda

    Michael, what a lovely write from you! A very cool form! Love it!

  • 4 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Superb piece with great story, great rhyming and imagery. You have nailed it. Milly x

  • 4 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I genuinely don't know how I missed this, but I did, so there.
    Anyway, here now to tell you I didn't miss much...

    Just kidding. Love this. Mixing nature and love is always a winning formula, isn't it? To be honest, I'm not sure why I have never written one of these.

    Take care, Michael.

    • 4 months ago

      by - Mr. Darcy

      You bastard! Lol
      This form is right up your street. Like a sonnet, there are many rhyme schemes to keep a poet interested.

  • 4 months ago

    by Everlasting

    “You bastard .... interested”

    ^ lol.
    That comment drew my attention. Well done with the octave.

  • 4 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Absolutely loved this, I'd give one a go but that iambic pentameter always puts me right off lol. Good job as always though.. Maybe we'll see more of these
    Take care x

  • 4 months ago

    by Star

    The iambic pentameter is something I could never understand, but i love reading!! I also love the rhythm and rhyme of this. All together this is a really beautiful piece :)

  • 4 months ago

    by Michael

    Congratulations Mr D, a well-deserved winning piece squire :)

  • 4 months ago

    by Aearion

    I can Say I really enjoyed this, keep it up but I am sure you will.. never wrote myself a Octave poem maybe I did in class but I should try and give it a shot! Love it congrats on the win.

  • 4 months ago

    by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald

    What a wonderful form beautifully written.... Love the imagery :)

    A deserving win! :D