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A very nice form Mr D, with a nice story to boot! Not easy to do, but you have done this well indeed :) M
by Poet on the Piano
I love that perpetual promise here and the steadfastness of your words. Happy to see this nominated!
Michael, what a lovely write from you! A very cool form! Love it!
by Milly Hayward
Superb piece with great story, great rhyming and imagery. You have nailed it. Milly x
by Ben Pickard
I genuinely don't know how I missed this, but I did, so there.
Anyway, here now to tell you I didn't miss much...
Just kidding. Love this. Mixing nature and love is always a winning formula, isn't it? To be honest, I'm not sure why I have never written one of these.
Take care, Michael.
by Mr. Darcy
You bastard! Lol
This form is right up your street. Like a sonnet, there are many rhyme schemes to keep a poet interested.
“You bastard .... interested”
That comment drew my attention. Well done with the octave.
by Em (marmite)
Absolutely loved this, I'd give one a go but that iambic pentameter always puts me right off lol. Good job as always though.. Maybe we'll see more of these
Take care x
The iambic pentameter is something I could never understand, but i love reading!! I also love the rhythm and rhyme of this. All together this is a really beautiful piece :)
Congratulations Mr D, a well-deserved winning piece squire :)
I can Say I really enjoyed this, keep it up but I am sure you will.. never wrote myself a Octave poem maybe I did in class but I should try and give it a shot! Love it congrats on the win.
by (Olwin ) Lee Mcdonald
What a wonderful form beautifully written.... Love the imagery :)
A deserving win! :D