Comments : I Think Of You - Rondeau

  • 2 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    These forms can either run smoothly or stutter. I found parts were like silk, whereas other parts needed a dry clean. It maybe my reading them, or/and my borrowed spectacles, in which case, bravo, good job and jolly well done. X

    • 2 months ago

      by Everlasting

      You are right! Hehe there are times when we have to decide whether to give up meaning or make it really smooth! Can’t have both unfortunately. Thank you so much.

  • 2 months ago

    by Star

    I can feel that you enjoy writing Rondeau’s, thats why we enjoy reading them. Keep them coming :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    this is beautiful!!

    • 2 months ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you Maple.

      Sorry vía my phone and i praise the comment by mistake

  • 2 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A superb Rondeau. The imagery is lovely weaving nature through as reminders of the one you love means that you are always fated to be thinking of him. An excellent write. Milly x

  • 2 months ago

    by [M(/)U]

    This is beautiful! :)