Comments : I Think Of You - Rondeau

  • 6 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    These forms can either run smoothly or stutter. I found parts were like silk, whereas other parts needed a dry clean. It maybe my reading them, or/and my borrowed spectacles, in which case, bravo, good job and jolly well done. X

    • 6 years ago

      by Everlasting

      You are right! Hehe there are times when we have to decide whether to give up meaning or make it really smooth! Can’t have both unfortunately. Thank you so much.

  • 6 years ago

    by Star

    I can feel that you enjoy writing Rondeau’s, thats why we enjoy reading them. Keep them coming :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    this is beautiful!!

    • 6 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you Maple.

      Sorry vía my phone and i praise the comment by mistake

  • 6 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A superb Rondeau. The imagery is lovely weaving nature through as reminders of the one you love means that you are always fated to be thinking of him. An excellent write. Milly x

  • 6 years ago

    by Mortal Utopia

    This is beautiful! :)