Comments : let me tell you about my rage

  • 1 week ago

    by Milly Hayward

    This is a very powerful an angry write indeed. I think you have portrayed really well the extremes that anger can take someone. Well done it made me feel that i was right in the middle of it. Milly x

    • 6 days ago

      by safachan

      thank you so much for your kind words . i am glad that you were able to empathize with it and project of piece of yourself in it as well.

  • 1 week ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Guess I'm not the only one that gets angry then. sometimes it is difficult to hold down and sometimes I simply can't.

    But I'm getting there.

    respect.

    Craig

    • 6 days ago

      by safachan

      thank you so much for the feedback .
      yeah we all have our share of emotional breakouts but i guess anger is one of the most common ones that we face pretty much daily.
      don't worry , it's good to understand your own emotions and to make peace with them.

  • 1 day ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Dear Safachan, in your own words, this poem describes who you are, a powerful write. My analysis of it, is this; anger is a result of failure or frustration, it's explosion temporarily relives stress, like an overheated steam boiler. Anger can also be a defense for one who has a poor self image. A poor diet can knock the brain for a loop, the Greeks saw the brain for what it is, an organ of the body, body sick, brain sick, thus the saying; Sound of body, sound of mind! If I may, I suggest a check-up with a good Chiropractor, who is also a certified dietician. The problem with MD's is that their non-organic medicines can make you worse. I've been their, all of it, but, thank God, it's all gone! Great write, deserves a WIN!