This poem reaches over the boundaries of age, culture and health and sends a positive message to anyone who has ever found their life's dreams and hopes breaking down around them that life is so short that there are still dreams and hope that still can be found if you look for them.
This is insightful and uplifting and a real pleasure to read. Best wishes Milly x

Do what you can whilst you are here for that's what people remember. I like the message, the flow of the poem with perfect rhymes..well done and Congrats on the win!!

Such a really good poem loved every minute of it well flowed and so much meaning the first bit got me really teary I dunno why thanks for sharing ur poem :)