Comments : Lost (Sonnet - Double Rhyme)

  • 4 years ago

    by Em (marmite)

    This is excellent

  • 4 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Absolutely amazing. This is brilliant. Hugs to you Milly

  • 4 years ago

    by Michael

    A truly wonderful sonnet Miss Milly, a weave of love and darkness.
    M:) x

  • 4 years ago

    by Walter

    A beautiful sonnet Milly and I totally agree with the other comments, well written and glad to see it nominated x

  • 4 years ago

    by Mark

    It's beautifully expressed, with internal rhyming in every line of a sonnet! Amazing

  • 4 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    A beautiful sonnet Milly. I felt it.

  • 4 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Thank you everyone for all of your lovely comments, they are really very much appreciated. All my best wishes Milly x

  • 4 years ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    I've never seen a double rhymed sonnet before. This is fab Milly! :-) x
    =^ .^=

  • 4 years ago

    by stormingdance (Jessica)

    Beautiful, I love the double rhymes -- the double rhymes don't retract from the imagery or rhythm, very clever!

  • 4 years ago

    by Matt Carroll

    This is fantastic.

  • 3 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Interesting form with such a smooth flow. I liked the
    read and the feelings within it...nicely penned...take care