This is excellent

Absolutely amazing. This is brilliant. Hugs to you Milly

A truly wonderful sonnet Miss Milly, a weave of love and darkness.
M:) x

A beautiful sonnet Milly and I totally agree with the other comments, well written and glad to see it nominated x

It's beautifully expressed, with internal rhyming in every line of a sonnet! Amazing

A beautiful sonnet Milly. I felt it.

Thank you everyone for all of your lovely comments, they are really very much appreciated. All my best wishes Milly x

I've never seen a double rhymed sonnet before. This is fab Milly! :-) x
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Beautiful, I love the double rhymes -- the double rhymes don't retract from the imagery or rhythm, very clever!

This is fantastic.

Interesting form with such a smooth flow. I liked the
read and the feelings within it...nicely penned...take care