A Pony Poem (Limerick)

There once was a pony called pie
in a field, she always would lie
in the sand, she'd a lookup
see a cloud-like a cup
and imagine she'd drunk it all dry.

Copyrighted by Abstract Poet

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It was 2 months ago I had trouble writing a Limerick it was my second tempt trying to write a Limerick and Milly offered to help me to understand this style. So she wrote this poem by taking some of the words from my other poem. I wrote it was called My Little Pony Buttercream Pie Poem I still don't understand how she came up with this but I do like it though.
I want to say thank you for all your help Milly Hayward.

P.S. If you like this poem check out my other poem it's called A Pony Part II Poem you will see the same message I put here because I wanted to say thank you to Milly Hayward.