This had my full attention from the start, especially that second stanza. And I agree with what David said. The ending just didn't quite work for me and left me a little confused. Very good effort though<3
I'll deviate from the rest of the comments to say that I enjoyed the ending; I'm not sure if it was intentional but since it was so abrupt, it didn't match the poem much like how "the plot/did not match the weather". Poetic & ironic. :)
That being said I enjoyed this and I really love the second last stanza, it paints an interesting image.