Comments : I Became the Moon

  • 5 years ago

    by Aearion

    Wow.. truly just wow. that last half was wow. I can in vision this poem and can relate. But hopefully something for you will eclipse that moon but for the better.

    • 5 years ago

      by Kate

      Thank you!

  • 5 years ago

    by RavenBunny

    Absolutely stunning. I love this - just simply that. I love this.

    • 5 years ago

      by Kate

      Thank you. Beautiful words from a beautiful writer.

  • 5 years ago

    by Walter

    This is amazing Kate! Love this too and added to my favorites.

  • 5 years ago

    by yogi73

    Loved the personification of the moon.
    The only memory left of you
    Just a simple reflection - such a poignant and sorrowful ending. Well done

  • 5 years ago

    by silver cloud

    Hope

  • 5 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Beautiful <3

  • 5 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I can't do much more than sigh after reading this piece! In two stanzas, you say so much. There's heartache and loss and a metaphor that holds such sorrow of this lost love.

    Love your writes so much.

  • 5 years ago

    by zvikov chirema

    Bravo!!

  • 4 years ago

    by Linda

    And Sokka’s heart was broken.

    I love this soooooo much.

    • 4 years ago

      by Kate

      I didn’t even think about that! How sad :(

  • 4 years ago

    by Lost star

    Beautifully penned!! I'm becoming quite the fan! Great word choice and clarity to this write, really well crafted:)