Very relatable piece on not just overthinking, but the anxiety in which we feel there is no reprieve from, especially chastising ourselves for not doing more etc.

I feel like line breaks or at least periods on the fourth, eighth and twelfth line could have helped the flow here. Also, I think (or at least am pretty sure?) you don't need the apostrophes for "hundred's".

Last four lines felt the weakest to me. "Over over" broke the flow - maybe "over AND over". "comes to life" didn't seem like the strongest phrase, instead of "comes", maybe use a musical verb to connect with the record/tune part of this stanza.

"Then the sunrises up" felt awkwardly worded. Also didn't think you needed the "then" in the second part of that line. Neat mention of "opera" though. The closing lines wasn't as satisfying... I get the relief of the sun coming up, the noise of something other than your thoughts, maybe use a more powerful and dramatic way to get that across than "beautiful" to describe the sounds? Since this is the end of the night and the start of a new day.

Just some ideas, glad to see you posting, Lainie! :)

I like this piece, thank you for sharing!