Desires

by Ziad Dib Jreige   Apr 16, 2020


Desires

Once I loved a root
And that root loved me
It kept sucking me
It took all my goods
Till I left nearly empty

Then I loved a branch
And that branch loved me
It kept giving me goods
Fruits and leaves till I left
With painful uselessness

It was only when
I loved a whole vine
Ad that vine loved me
That I was satisfied
Snd put into peace.

© Ziad Dib Jreige

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  • 4 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I can't help but share that this reminds me of the children's book, "The Giving Tree".
    I think in the last stanza, the third line should be "And that vine loved me" and the last line "And put into peace", there were just a few spelling errors?

    The contrast of giving but never receiving in the first stanza, being drained of spirit and purpose, yet being given too much in the next stanza that you do not know what do... and finally, finding balance and being interdependent.

    Love this!

    • 4 years ago

      by Ziad Dib Jreige

      Hello.

      Oh, nice
      I'll check that hiving tree : )
      Of course of course. You are definitely right aboit that my friend. And that vine loved ... And put... thank you for pointing this up. Tha k you so much always, always appreciating your feedbacks and support. Glad you love it.

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