Comments : napowrimo 22 - Gloomy

  • 4 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Ahh, I cannot pick a single favorite line because I love ALL of them. The feel of this, the soft reassurance that there will be light, that there is another path... something about this was so comforting. I thought of it as a friend who is rooted in fear, cannot see a way out, yet you gently remind them the dawn will come and it will be a new day.

    Beautiful <3

  • 4 years ago

    by prasanna

    'your're often ready for farewell.'

    'your're' should be you're

    MA really put it best, this is a warming write with you trying to gentle nudge someone towards light, towards hope <3