Comments : In 13 (6)

  • 1 year ago

    by D.

    Rania, I adore these 13 word poems you're writing. This one in particular.

    • 1 year ago

      by RM

      thank you Danny;

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    So cool, love the content and the concept.

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Short but dynamic delivery Loved it. Milly x

  • 1 year ago

    by prasanna

    Love this!

  • 1 year ago

    by Violet Raven

    I adore short poetry so much more than long poetry because it takes skill to write them. Thinking about lines and making a story out of them especially when your word count is limited is a fun activity.

    After this person you become more creative and that tells me you are in a better mental place. For me when i write i have to be mentally clear to be able to focus fully on a poem. So i love the first two lines as they resemble happiness and a freedom a lot of people don't have.

    You use your pain to be creative and use your pain for writing at least that is what the next two lines tell me. I love love the words 'making love' here because there could be a fine line between hurt and comfort with love making. You kind of did both here because

    You make masterpieces with the pain but also struggle. Loved the story here

  • 1 year ago

    by Liz

    I'm loving these short pieces!