Comments : Jeremy Asleep

  • 9 months ago

    by cassie hughes

    Such a lovely piece, full of love and contentment. I especially like the line 'I listen to your heart that is matched evenly with my thoughts.' A beautiful piece.

  • 9 months ago

    by hiraeth

    "I trace my fingers against your skin like dragging a magnet."

    I love the imagery in that verse!

    I love this piece it's so sweet and serene!

  • 9 months ago

    by Aiko (Dreamsurfer)

    Lovely and pictorial...