Comments : you spill from the seams

  • 2 years ago

    by Star

    Who said you can’t write?????? This is amazinggggg :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    There are few words, few words to even portray how I'm feeling after reading this! The brilliance of these lines, the crescendo:

    "and i'm spilling all the light
    i swallowed when i tried to bite your sun.
    an inferno swells in my rib-cage,
    inching towards the liver"

    then the way you are limited by language, like there is nothing to possibly due it justice, almost like it would have to be the language of gods to truly understand or explain this.

    "let me sing of you" just encompasses how deep this love is. How full you are with it, that it is love itself, not simply a single manifestation, but love extended.

    Such a dreamy, unapologetically romantic piece!

  • 2 years ago

    by Skyfire

    If I could love this ten times over I would. This is a really beautiful one hiraeth. I felt the absolute yearning as I read.

  • 2 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    You know these kinda poems you need to read a few times over and over again just to absorb the whole inspiration and depth they offer and feel the sheer meaningfulness they have? Yeah well, this is one of 'em.

  • 2 years ago

    by Rania

    <3 .........................