Comments : My Redemption ( Collab with Star )

  • 1 month ago

    by hiraeth

    Such a thought provoking write on the return of grass-poly. I had to look it up and this poem did such a good job narrating that and giving it a unique perspective from the plant.

    A link for anyone else: https://www.bbc.com/news/science-environment-55104153

  • 1 month ago

    by Keira Pickard

    Amazing! I've always been interested in plants, and love reading poems about them.
    This is really good, and, as Mark said, thought provoking. Excellent collaboration!

  • 1 month ago

    by Star

    Thank you Mark and Keira :)

    I really enjoyed writing with you Luce ^_^

    • 1 month ago

      by Everlasting

      Same here. It was fun writing with you Star

  • 1 month ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    i found an old sixpence in the mud of a riverbank once. Unfortunately due to decimalisation it is practically worthless. Still it is shiny and makes me smile - just like this poem, your talent has shone through and the image of the little pink flower made me smile.

  • 1 month ago

    by Meena Krish

    Very interestingly and vividly penned by the two of you! You have given life and character to a plant, well done you two!

  • 1 month ago

    by Star

    Did I not tell you that I'm a good writing partner :p jk
    Congrats on the HM Luce ^_^