Comments : Just too much

  • 1 month ago

    by ddavidd

    "A whisper on the wind you shall never hear and I give into the ocean a lost and lonely tear."

    So sweet!!

    • 1 month ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thanks dude. Was a struggle to write this one as it's kinda true.

      Sometimes it's harder to walk away than it is to face things and vocalise

  • 1 month ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    I love the format and rhyme. This is so emotionally charged. Sometimes our hearts want to give more that our heads can manage.

  • 1 month ago

    by Meena Krish

    A moving write with deep emotions buried within one's heart...touching write. Take care