Teardrops - Senryu

by Walter   Sep 12, 2021


Loves like a rainbow
Its true colours will be seen
Right after a storm

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  • 2 years ago

    by BOB GALLO

    It is nice and dandy, though I have a little problem with this:
    Rainbow does't exist before, or, even during the storm.

    I like reading some of your Senryus

  • 2 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Love the simile in this! It seems so simple of an image, but it's effective, and truthful. I'm reminded of the healing process, and the amount of work required from both sides in relationships. It's very telling how people will try to work through the storms. Will they pretend like there was no damage done? Will they discuss the significance of it and listen to one another? Will they talk about the emotions behind it?

    Great senryu!

    • 2 years ago

      by Walter

      Thanks Poet and yes, the healing process can often seem harder work than the storm itself. It's always too easy turning a bling eye, but sometimes you just can't hide the damage done.

  • 2 years ago

    by Pia

    Isn't that the truth! :D

    • 2 years ago

      by Walter

      It certainly is! Thanks Teria :)

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