by RavenBunny
Another absolutely stunning piece that runs wild with imagery. Very well done. |
by Kate
Why, thank you. |
by Lost star
Totally agree with RB on this, it is wonderfully written with imagery that literally envelopes the reader, i really like the tone you've set, I especially like the tempo of the write too through the way you've presented it along with the punctuation it controls the reader through your world nicely. Adding to favs straight away. |
by Kate
Thank you! |
Just reading this was cathartic, and sort of makes me want it to be summer again! Every line kept me connected here, this storm that, to others, may be a nuisance, but to you, is a symbol of something reawakening. It reaches you. Makes you feel alive again. |
by Kate
Thank you. Your comments are always so spot on. This is one of the things I miss the most about home. It rains here but not like home, where I could smell it before it began and could stand in it for as long as I wanted. I’m glad you liked it! |
by mistake
This poem to me is like when you smell something and you are transported temporarily away from your current senses. I feel I can’t give much higher praise then that. |