Purple (Haiku)
by The Fallen Angel Feb 16, 2022
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Beautiful, purple |
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3 years ago
by BOB GALLO
You are doing very fine. A very talented poet already nominated one of your haikus.
I would have also if I were a senior member.-
3 years ago
I am already in cloud nine now!! Thank you so much
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3 years ago
by BOB GALLO
It is exquisite dear Angel, though the syllabus count do not match, the second line is 8 and the third four. Perhaps by altering it a little you could change it. A suggestion for example::
Beautiful, purple
calm solitary twilights
our salient nights-
3 years ago
Thank you so much! This was a second try with the Haiku! Noted and I have already amended the poem with your suggestion. :D
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