Comments : Destined (not a poem just a little story)

  • 11 months ago

    by Everlasting

    I do. I have always believe in fate and destiny.
    My fate is to die one day. My destiny is to die one day. Haha ,however, I get to choose how.
    It seems that no matter what I choose, I am bound to get to that point. We are stuck in a circle. The possibilities are endless. So, I can try to walk all over the circle and extend my stay longer. It’s my choice. Or just go walk directly to my fate and destiny.

    I love your story. Thank you for sharing.

    But it feels good to breath. I’ll just explore the endless possibilities.

    • 11 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      I've always viewed things with a certain inevitably. My end will be my end. Although I do not rush towards such it is however inevitable.

      Suppose while I am still here though it gives comfort to know somethings still will play out. Without logic or reason somethings just fall into place.



  • 11 months ago

    by The Fallen Angel

    Beautifully penned!! I love your story!!

  • 11 months ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I loved reading this, Craig! Made me smile and I'm happy for you both. I don't particularly believe in fate and can be quite cynical at times, but have had a few things lately that were like, woah. When things just fit, and you can't necessarily explain. This was really inspiring to read, and I'm glad you shared a big part of your life's story with us :)

    • 11 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thank you for you're lovely comment.

      I'm terribly cynical and very much say what I think. I do believe in things in my own way but often the hardships of life make me question even myself.

      The reason behind this write was that I was hundreds of miles from home. I thought how do we endure. Then jesus what were the chances of us meeting?

      Kinda happy with the way things transpired x