Comments : Forgiveness

  • 1 year ago

    by ddavidd

    Beautiful poem as always my friend, and a true message.

    • 1 year ago

      by Koan

      Thank you!

  • 1 year ago

    by Walter

    Really enjoyed the read and glad to see it nominated...words worthy for a win.

    • 1 year ago

      by Koan

      Thank you!

  • 1 year ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    I like a concrete/shaped poem. Your diamond shaped poem is a gem! Its contents is more of a hidden gem: Forgiveness is an act that if given can free up the heart of the forgiven and that of the forgiver, too! As you rightly say, this act will 'leave behind for others to follow'

    Nice work - take care.

    • 1 year ago

      by Koan

      Thank you..!!

  • 1 year ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Powerful!!!

    • 1 year ago

      by Koan

      Thank you for reading and feeling it..!!

  • 1 year ago

    by arquious

    "Cleanse your temple from false idols" such a beautiful and active phrase! And what we leave behind for others, almost like footprints and inheritance. Inspired!