Betrayal

by Ten Feet Tall   Jul 22, 2004


She told him it was over
Their love had gone astray
The endless nights of crying
Just had to go away

Their love was so pure
Nothing could come between
That young man and woman
Until he had come clean

He said it was another
His heart had come to love
That night he came home
Ended with more than just a shove

She knew he had been lying
Never had to work that late
The other was the reason why
He always broke the date

He came home at all hours
With a different scent on the air
A perfume not her own
Had finally broke the pair

Her anger was so great that night
And the gun close at her side
Left nowhere for him to go
Nowhere to run and hide

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  • 19 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    great poem, have to go read the extended version now..definetly deserving of its 5 rating

  • 19 years ago

    by Katie Silva

    another great poem! your poems bring out powerfull emotion! i love it!

  • 19 years ago

    by Joe Moore

    I really liked your poem
    thanks for reading mine
    i'll read more of yours
    good love to you.

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Val

    Oh wow loved this poem. I think all I can think is WOW. LOL, I'm gonna check more of your stuff out.
    I definately give you a 5 on this one.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ten Feet Tall

    thanks everyone for giving me ideas. all of them were very good ideas, but i think i finally came to a decision. but thanks again! :)

    Ten Feet Tall