Leaving This world

by Perfectlyunperfect37   Jul 27, 2004


A total straner, left this world
with suicide
Left so many to hurt,
left so many to cry.
There had to be enough
pain, for one
to feel the need to die.
You can control the pain,
unless strength you could
not gain.
I know where he came from,
I use to think life was dumb.
I came apon the lord to pull
me through,
Thinking that was not something
he could do.
Now hes gone you see,
Left so many to hurt,
Left so many to cry.
There had to be enough
paing, for one
to feel the need to die.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Shea

    ok its ova now i can write bak to u ... lol... well ttyl
    Shea

  • 19 years ago

    by Shea

    Yes I like james... but not in the kinda like you have been thinking... and i was the one all along that wanted to be friends! and i dumped you cuz i dont like you anymore how many times do i have to say it? bbl...
    Shea

  • 19 years ago

    by Shea

    Kyle see befor I was begging you to be my friend and you said that you dont think you can be and you are telling me that I dont wanna be friends wit u... I only said i dont THINK i can be friends wit u cuz u kept dragging this out and i really didnt say anything mean and nasty... You were meaner than me... kyle i wanna be friends wit u but u didnt befor... you keep changing emotions it is gettin confusing! well i g2g to karte...
    Shea

  • 19 years ago

    by Shea

    Kyle I dont like you I am sorry. And aparently I wasnt worth it cuz I am done with you! And i hope you know all the comments you write to me hurt. just to let you know. And I didnt dump u cuz i liked sum1 else... or cuz u looked @ another girl... if i did dump you for looking @ another girl i wouldnt fogive myself cuz i know i look @ different guys. Kyle your the one dragging this out... EVERYONE THINX SO... and i dont even know if i can be friends with you now...
    Shea

  • 19 years ago

    by Perfectlyunperfect37

    WOW ALOT has gone on between you too? woofta.... sorry for both of you i know break ups are hard on both end becuase i've been on both ends before! anyhoo kyle i know how it is love somone so much you dont or you cant move on! im that situation right now noo doubt, i also know how it is not liking someone anymore for things they may have said or done! anyhoo well thats my opinion talk to you both soon I HOPE?!?!? either one of you going to write any poems? hmm okay talk to you l8er byebye

    michelle

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