wow... that was so good. is this a true poem? i hope to god it's not.
you wrote it really well and flows very good. keep it up.

Wow! That was very heart felt! You are so talented!! I love reading you poetry!!

that was one of the most true poems i have ever read....if i find out how to put you in favorties i will...1 question was that true?---itsjustme

OMG! That was so SAD!! You wrote it so wonderfully....but it was so sad. I had tears in my eyes!!
Amy

Hey... Great poem, so sad it makes me wanna cry. I only have one guesstion did this really happen to you? If it did i'm so sorry. One time a guy almost killed himself cuz of me, but i got there in time and stoped him. Awesome poem
~Nadiya~

that was awesome, and i really hope it isnt a true stroy, but it isnt yur fault. and kevin, shut the hell up, thats not even funny.

great job, a lot of emotion and feelings into it. Keep it up

that made me cry it was so good and i am sorry

hey loved ur poem.... well i gave it five...and hopefully all that wasnt true...
lol it kinda looks like Romeo and Juliet...
GREAT!

beautiful poem, a very touching story, for the second time in my life i cry reading a poem ... you're good at capturing the reader's heart ... keep it up :)

i have to say that that is a really good poem, even though it is probably the saddest poem i have ever read. I creied when i read it, and believe me i dont cry that often. is it a true story?

Id like to thank everyone for their nice coments, it really means a lot to me. And for all those ppl that asked..this isnt a true story, just something that popped into my mind. Thanks again

OMG! I love the emotion you put into this, Its like I was living it.

your poem was so sad

this poem was amazing.. im really glad that it wasnt true.. but the way you wrote it it made it sound like you lived through it.. nice job, not many people can put that much emotion into something that hasnt happened to them. I loved it.. keep up the good work, cause this one was awsome. I gave it a 5

u have such an awesome talent.....it made me cry!!!!! GREAT WORK
*~*~jessycar~*~*

YAY finally someone realised where i got the idea from. lol. Yeah that song inspired me to write this.

Thats was a Really Good Poem i had something like that happen to me and i know it sucks and there is not much i can say cause i dont know the pain you are feeling but i do hope you get over it someday and the same goes for me as well . Keep Writing

Omg that was soooo sad oh it was good tho

Wow what a sad poem...its great and im crying right now