Comments : The Black Rose

  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    This was very dark and interesting! I liked it!!

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessa

    aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! i'm so0o0o0o0o0o0o jealous!!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow wonderful job you did on this! i loved the rhyming in it! the poem flowed really nicely. i dont see anything wrong with it. keep up the great work! 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow this was a great poem. I really loved the way you described things. Excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    Rain falls from the sky
    -The angels start cry or As the angels cry-
    Tears of blood for pain and suffering
    Ten-thousand years of wondering
    Velvet sky turned cold and gray
    All of them had nothing to say
    Wishing the pain would go away
    Wishing for a brand new day
    Singing songs of misery
    Pain is the base of their mystery
    Their hearts and souls slowly die
    Cos' their lives were just a lie
    Hear the voices of the dead
    Listen to what was said
    Emptiness is what they chose
    -That was the way of The Black Rose-

    I always say, if you use your title in your poem, CAPITALIZE. It add emphaise(sp) emf a sis..

    I usually choose which stanzas/lines I love the best, but this is soo beautiful, I cannot choose. Amazing job.

    Excellent

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    My words are not going to do this well written dark poem justice so I will just and you to my favorites

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. this is a really great poem.. and it has a great flow.. its nice when you read it fast.. great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    What i suggest you do is add one or two more descriptive words to the second line. only wat i would do tho.

    i loved it. all of it. it made sense to me, and it was easy to read.

    i gave you a 5. it was so perfect. and so imaginative.

    David

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    A very unique dark poem. I like the methaphor. Nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    I really loved this poem. This one is definately one of my favorites. [The one to your mom is my favorite] Great job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I liked this. The flow was good and the whole poem itself was wonderful, although kind of sad. 5/5

    Chelsey

  • 15 years ago

    by Brad Quammen

    I know you've probably heard this a million times,but none-the-less,you have a great style.I enjoyed how you made one word flow to the next.5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    Good stuff!! :)