This was very dark and interesting! I liked it!!

aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! i'm so0o0o0o0o0o0o jealous!!!!!!!!!

Wow wonderful job you did on this! i loved the rhyming in it! the poem flowed really nicely. i dont see anything wrong with it. keep up the great work! 5/5

~Kristina

Wow this was a great poem. I really loved the way you described things. Excellent job!

Rain falls from the sky
-The angels start cry or As the angels cry-
Tears of blood for pain and suffering
Ten-thousand years of wondering
Velvet sky turned cold and gray
All of them had nothing to say
Wishing the pain would go away
Wishing for a brand new day
Singing songs of misery
Pain is the base of their mystery
Their hearts and souls slowly die
Cos' their lives were just a lie
Hear the voices of the dead
Listen to what was said
Emptiness is what they chose
-That was the way of The Black Rose-

I always say, if you use your title in your poem, CAPITALIZE. It add emphaise(sp) emf a sis..

I usually choose which stanzas/lines I love the best, but this is soo beautiful, I cannot choose. Amazing job.

Excellent

5/5

My words are not going to do this well written dark poem justice so I will just and you to my favorites

Wow.. this is a really great poem.. and it has a great flow.. its nice when you read it fast.. great job!

What i suggest you do is add one or two more descriptive words to the second line. only wat i would do tho.

i loved it. all of it. it made sense to me, and it was easy to read.

i gave you a 5. it was so perfect. and so imaginative.

David

A very unique dark poem. I like the methaphor. Nice job!

I really loved this poem. This one is definately one of my favorites. [The one to your mom is my favorite] Great job! 5/5

I liked this. The flow was good and the whole poem itself was wonderful, although kind of sad. 5/5

Chelsey

I know you've probably heard this a million times,but none-the-less,you have a great style.I enjoyed how you made one word flow to the next.5/5

Good stuff!! :)