Miss me ©

by unprotected lover   Aug 1, 2004


Will you miss me when Im gone
Will you wish we never kissed goodbye
or will you curse at you foolishness
for leaving me with a blade alone?

The pain was too much
it numbed my body quick
think about that gentle kiss
and cutting my flesh clean

It quieted the voices
lessened the pain
letting it all go
freeing my soul

My body lays motionless
lying there with the blade
the pain was too much to handle
to hard on my living soul

too much to take
you caused me too much pain
taking a chance
taking the sharp blade

Will you miss me when Im gone
Will you wish we never kissed goodbye
or will you curse at your foolishness
for leaving me with a blade alone?

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jessy

    i love this poem tho it is really sad i am sorry yu heart must be broken but i love this poem!!!!! well buh bye
    hold strong!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessy

    i love this poem tho it is really sad i am sorry yu heart must be broken but i love this poem!!!!! well buh bye
    hold strong!

  • 19 years ago

    by unprotected lover

    thanks for your comments it really helps me change my writing and give it a little more feeling

  • 19 years ago

    by paperdoll

    Nice opening (and obviously closing) stanza, quite satisfying. You might have dragged on the point a little towards the end (especially with the repetition of the word "blade") but other than that, great imagery.

    -paperdoll

  • 19 years ago

    by unprotected lover

    thanks belle

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