You're in the Front Row

by Danielle   Aug 4, 2004


Vast oceans crash in your eyes
Am I dreaming again this time?
The wind carries your essence
As paper airplanes learn to fly.

Constant visions hidden within us
Are hung on walls much like trust
They come on occasion to deliver
Always there, lit with lust

Friendship and love, then a pause
They cherish what everyone does
Open wonder is better that closed belief
And not everything has a cause

Iridescent clouds blow over
Somewhat like those that have anger
Hold back and do not love
Unveils life's true danger

Lions tame their own paths
No one follows steps taken last
Keep to your ties of lace
Because you can't redesign the past

So live life with meanings upside-down
Don't linger around until it unfolds
You're in the front row, the pressures on
But a question still remains:
Will you make it on your own?

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  • 18 years ago

    by EJ

    that was really good!! the ending was great!! i have noticed you like water or more the ocean.. at least it has made an appearance in some of your writtings.. good!! bye bye EJ

  • 19 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    Startling, much as the rest. Your experience to weave an emotion, a tale, and or an idea radiates here.
    I can choose a favorite, but then as well make my one-by-one to praise you. (5)

  • 19 years ago

    by David

    I too love the the you described your feelings.
    Very good, Very touching.
    Nice flow.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    I like the poems descriptions. Nicely done!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Robyn Park

    That was awesome. I loved the rhyme scheme. Great poem. Keep it up