Scarred

Wow this poem is very deep and emotional. I really liked it. The flow & rhythm of it was amazing & really helped to bring out all of the emotions. Great job on this. I really liked it.

Very good, had a nice flow in the words and the lines where devided up nicely. You have quite a bit of talent, I think anyway:)

Best wishes,
Patrik

thank yu for commenting on my poem, and i hadnt noticed the first stanza didnt rhyme and i fixed it immediately, thanks.
your poem is very well done, i like how you repeated "Look at my scarred" and changed the last word.
i would change "It's always the same" to make it a tad longer to fit the flow of the rest, i might add a "to be" somewhere like "It's always to be the same" or "It's to always be the same" if you dont change it, its still nicely written and i enjoyed reading it.
~Freak~

I like how you wrote this. It's really good.

This one is by far my favorite of yours, your on favorite list keep on writing.