Mom 2

by Raven   Aug 13, 2004


You showed me
who I am inside.
told me to never
let my feelings hide.

To speak my mind when
I feel the need.
To watch for those who'll
make my heart bleed.

Follow the rules
listen, obey.
There's no tomorrow
without today.

You taught me how to
make dreams come true.
To respect my elders
that being you.

Thank you
for all the things you show.
For teaching me and
helping me grow.

You've been there all my life
since the start.
I'll always love you,Mom
with all me heart.

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  • 8 years ago

    by kelleyana

    Parents are golden but moms are everything. I can relate to this poem so much. You said everything i could have said to my mom , especially on days when i needed her most. Very good poem. Love it.

  • 13 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    From what I have read from you today, this it certainly your best work, in my opinion. It had strength, depth, emotion, flow, good wording, good rhyming. Twas good. My favourite stanza had to be the third one. It held the most power.

    Brad

    P.S. Please comment and vote honestly on every poem that you read.

  • 19 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Very sweet - your lucky to have such a great relationship with your mum! Lovely poem very well written
    Much Luv
    Eirisa xoox