Can't Stop Here

by Bryce Ellner   Aug 19, 2004


I've come so far,
Learned so many things.
Been through the best and worst of times,
But I've still got a ways to go.

The two ravens that follow me,
They say the worst is yet to come.
Whether they're right, I guess I'll find out.
I've come this far, I'm not turning back.

I've risked everything,
Achieved only a little.
Almost makes me want to cry sometimes.
Like I'm some worthless story.

I won't be lost in the fabric of time.
I won't go silent into that cold night.
I'll leave my mark, some way, some how
I'm not done with this world....not yet...not now...

(Thanks to everybody who has rated/commented on this poem, I hope you dont mind the editation I made on it. I added "not now..." onto the end after I reread it again)

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  • 19 years ago

    by Danielle

    good poem...

    can you read mine?... dont' start at the top though... those ones kinda suck... haha :-)

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    very good poem. i especially like free-verse and your poem is one of the best. very nice flow! take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Marta

    Wow. That was beautifully written. Nicely done, I enjoyed reading it, you've got some talent, keep it up. :) Oh, and thanks for commenting on my poem, very much appreciated. I'll hit you back with an e-mail sometime. Once again, great job on this poem! xo

  • 19 years ago

    by beaver

    I enjoyed reading your poem and liked it very much.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah

    Wow...that was beautiful...love is worth everything, all the risk, all the pain and all the memories. They make for great poetry! Well done!

    Sarah

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