by Mass Murder Aug 20, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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As a chatted with a stranger |
by Truest Lies
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I think that it was a beautiful gesture. Perhaps your should proof read it, though, because there were a few mistakes... but it had emotion, despite any of this, and that is what counts in a poem. |
by Leah20
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That was beautiful, so sad, great job conveying emotions here! |
by Nee
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go for it gurl :D beautiful poem |