When You Broke My Heart

by RockerJenni   Aug 21, 2004


Watch the mist surround you,
Stand by my side in death,
A beautiful red rose lays on the ground,
Your sparkling blue eyes, reveal my secrets,
A tear of blood trickles down my cheek,
My heart rots, unhealed and wounded,
I steal your breath, leaving you gasping,
Hold my rotting hand over your heart, and slows down the fading beat,
Your eyes flicker, they plead with me,
I pierce your heart with my dagger,
Igive You no sympathy, as i hold you in my arms, recalling my love for you,
You killed my the same way,
When you broke my heart

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  • 19 years ago

    by N8

    good job I love this poem your a great poet I like your word choice it's really like meaningful good job again
    -Nate

  • 19 years ago

    by stephanie

    hey Jenni!!!It's Stephanie (ur msn buddy) anywayz..that poem was really good..it was really well writen and I like the words you used...it was really strong and meaningful...you did an awsum job...I really hope ur okay though:( member i luv yah....even if Chris is being a poopy head lol