Out Of My Mind

by La Muse Angelique   Aug 24, 2004


The sun goes slowly under
My beautiful horizon
There's a thunder, everything will turn pitch black
And I'm scared, because I can't read you at all

Where are your arms, when I get lonely?
Those who holding me tightly
And don't let go, those who are warm and gentle
I can't feel them at all

They were never there
Only in my mind
And it's still dark, and I'm still scared
But then I realise, I wake up

I see the sun rising up again in the South
A beautiful light who made me see everything
Everything I didn't wanted to see
The thunder is over, so are you

No more joy, no more grief
No more pretending
Words can no longer hurt
Your pitch black, your out of my mind

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  • 19 years ago

    by La Muse Angelique

    Sean Allen I've private messaged you, to tell you my point of view about my poems. I hope you can do something with it :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Val

    I loved this one, I like your emotions your feelings you really work them out good!! Have you ever thought of writing Love poems, or have you already? I think that you would express good emotions there too!! I hope you write more real soon!!! Like I said before I love your sense of style!!
    Keep it up...I have a website too that you may want to check out the URL is poemsRus.bravehost.com
    there are poems on there by alot of members from this site too so just checkit out!!:)

  • 19 years ago

    by Nee

    keep on going gurl u r a great writer

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Hmm, that was pretty confusing lol. Are you telling the account of someone who has gone insane, or was that a metaphorical thing? What is the significance of the sun rising in the South instead of the East? By the way, in the last line it should be "you're" both times, and in the second to last line of the second to last stanza (what a screwed up sentence) it should be "want" not "wanted" since "didn't" is taking the conjugation for "want". Yeh, well considering I didn't really understand it TOO much, I can't say i loved it, but that is definitely more my fault then yours. :-/ eh sorry. feel free to private message me to set me straight.

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