Would you really care?

by Armed-Alcoholic   Aug 24, 2004


I feel it rise in my throat
It's the coming of new tears
And that empty feeling in my stomach
It's caused by my fears

I heard them talk about me
Saying I'm a disgrace
I think it hurts worse
Because they can't say it to my face

I can feel the sting
And it makes my head ache
The tremble of my lips
All from a heart break

I can feel that he'll die
I feel my heart's shattered screams
He left me with broken promises,
Broken ribs, and broken dreams

When I breathe, it's unsteady
And I can't control the shakes
The sun hurts my burning eyes
My heart slowly breaks

I could say a million words
But I'm too tired, hurt, and scared
I could tell you I tried to kill myself
But would you really care?

by the way I'm talking about me in this poem

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  • 19 years ago

    by Still x Here

    yes i would care, you are an amazing writer, ive read almost all of your poems, you're great and all those girls that you have said you love... they are so lucky!

    -Sarah-

    .x.fAlLeN.aNgEl.x.

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Missing Them Already*~

    This is a very good poem. To answer your last question of the poem....if you told me you tried to kill yourself...YES I WOULD CARE...You are an amazing writer. You are an amazing person, and believe it or not, you have helped a lot of people on this site. Your poems have helped ME!! Please try to be okay. I know its hard...but if you want to talk....I am here...
    Love always
    Sammy

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    Oh, I sorry. You must have really cared for her. Sad, but great job. Keep up the good work. Poems can always be a good outlet. Great job.