by Ben Aug 29, 2004
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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I'm praying for tidal waves |
by Sherry Lynn
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Excellent job, much emotion expressed. |
by Danielle
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Great job... poweful, emotional... awesome! |
by Malene
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Great poem, i like the anger. |
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lovely poem ben, great words and rhymes, and story conflict as john said. you're an amazing writer and i hope you don't actually mean it...hope to talk to you soon...love u <3 xxx |
by james
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I agree with Julie, I feel the revenge of wanting others to feel you pain through you poem. |