Opaque

by Timothy   Aug 31, 2004


Life consisted of an ominous pretense,
Left alone with the cacophony of my silent loneliness;
The well-wishers had long departed, left me alone in my solitude,
My amiability left me, replaced with this chaotic shadowy brood.

One quick blast, and I thought it a great reprieve,
But the finality never came, and I yet grieve;
There is a place, beyond the mortal sight;
A land where the godly angels never dare to take flight.

Betrayers and Mutineers suffer interminable consequences, as rats, leeches and snakes eat their eyes,
The drizzle of rain falls forever, but it does not camouflage the harrowing cries;
Murderers and pedophiles limp down the street, encumbered by heavy yokes,
Everyone exists in torment, but a person can never be permanently broke.

The petulance of the Ruler--I perpetually hear his horrid laugh--adds to the misery,
Parched by a raging thirst, but the boiling waters leave me thirsty;
The sun is extinguished for eternity,
The benevolence of a friendly heart is now a fantasy.

The trees are dead, their branches hang with dripping moss,
The inhabitants of this realm appear the same, burdened with personal loss;
Suicide is my sin; it is why I quake,
And it is the reason I eternally dwell in the Kingdom of the Opaque.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Keanna Hopkins

    That is excellent! All ur emotions just come out soo smoothly in writting! This poem is by far one of your best!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    BTW thanks for commenting on my poem :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    This kinda reminds me of mine...the one your commented on...Only yours goes into more details. Yours is amazing. Makes mine look pathetic lol. I really loved the lines:

    There is a place, beyond the mortal sight;
    A land where the godly angels never dare to take flight

    and I loved how you ended this making this dark world the world inwhich your trapped in because you commited sucide. I had great visuals in this, you described this land perfect. I would hate to live here thats for sure. Amazing!!!!