Nursery Rhyme

by Armed-Alcoholic   Sep 3, 2004


Cut one: I think my world is done.
Cut two: I'm feeling really blue.
Cut three: I'm finally on my knees.
Cut four: blood is on the floor.
Cut five: can't believe I'm still alive.
Cut six: this problem can't be fixed.
Cut seven: I won't be going to heaven.
Cut eight: I'm starting more and more to hate.
Cut nine: the problem is not yours, it's mine.
Cut ten: finally, the end.

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  • 19 years ago

    by TAinted vįŕťues

    Amaizing !!!!

    Awesome idea!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Nefarius

    as a poem it is really good, very hard words, when you read the cut one (two, three, ...) in the beginning of evry line, it shivers down your spine, really impressing