by Joy Sep 4, 2004
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
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I am a girl who lives to sing and wishes on stars. |
by TrUtH hUrTs
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nice 1 keep writing! |
by vanessarrr
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i make crappy poems if they're a school project etc. how do you do it? lol. well, this one was very nice and i liked the fact that you had a refrain. you don't see that in most poems... take care:) |
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Your poetry is really deep and really good 4 your age, just thought i'd add. xmollyxx |
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Very nice poem, i like the fact that it doesn't rhyme. its like your life (if the poems about you) isn't perfect and neither should the poem. do u get what i mean? xmollyxx |
by Lucy
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its a very nice poem, i hope you keep writing...Lee Nicole* |