My sweetest lily

by Timothy   Sep 8, 2004


The splash of sunshine
On your face
It is an image
The comes to me at my waking moment
Your beauty
Is such a sedating thought
Like a flower that has newly bloomed
It's youthful existence
Is like fresh water
An inviting presence with a sensuous scent
You are all these sensations to me and so much more
In a valley of the world's most aromatic flowers
You are my sweetest lily.

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  • 19 years ago

    by jamie25

    i swear you just get better at writing poems everyday.. this one was a sweet one!

  • 19 years ago

    by Timothy

    Thank you, thank you! No applause necessary...just throw money! LOL.

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    ooohh I really loved this one. Its so sweet. I love the line:
    Is such a sedating thought. I had to read this to my husband, and he really liked it also. But unlike me he said he really liked the fresh water line for some reason. And i agree w/ him. THere is nothing more pure then fresh water. :) Great Job writing this.

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