Would It Be Easier...?

by Broken   Sep 14, 2004


My life has completely crumbled
Its been torn into nothing
I took everything for granted
Now all I want is something

Something to pick up the pieces
Someone to say it'll be OK
But something never comes
And I die more every day

Why did fate give me this story?
Every good ounce of what I had
Everything I took so selfishly
Has been twisted into something bad

Every single day I live in hell
Trying to piece it all together
But someone breaks my puzzle
Pushing me a little farther

I hate just being me
Sometimes I wish I would die
Cuz maybe this life's not worth living
Would it be easier to say goodbye?

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  • 21 years ago

    by Andrea

    very good poem and i can relate

  • 21 years ago

    by Broken

    thank you...that means a lot

  • 21 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    I agree a better day will come for you and until then your in my prayers - but thinking seriously how can you ever know what it is like to be happy, if you never suffer through pain? Someone out there is always worse off than you hun just have faith and believe in yourself - stay smiling Eirisa xxoxo

  • 21 years ago

    by Broken

    thanks andrea...that comment really did help alot...

  • 21 years ago

    by Amy~Lynn

    I liked it...it had a nice rythm to it...keep writing...don't 4get 2 check out my poems too!! Aiight...much luv... ~Amy

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