Look At Me Now

by LiL One   Sep 18, 2004


When we got together,
we both agreed,
that we would try our hardest,
to make this relationship succeed.

We were so much alike,
and so much in lust,
everything was good,
until you lost my trust.

That's when the arguments started,
along with the stress,
I was so lost in my emotions,
I was such a mess.

My biggest mistake,
was listening to what other people thought,
I let them control me,
they will never understand the pain they brought.

I don't see,
how one person could make me feel so good,
how I could love one person so much,
I wish you could have understood.

Then other times,
you made my heart bleed,
you beat me down,
when love was all I need.

Now I want you to look at me,
straight in the eye,
I want to tell you one thing...
Goodbye!

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  • 19 years ago

    by FireCracker

    this poem was amazing and i totally loved it, its so cute and sweet, from what i've seen I assume you to be a very talented and creative person and u have a pretty good future wit writin as I've read lol, but I love your poems, thye are just awesome I only wish my poems were that gr8 .. Kepp up the WONDERFUL job and definaetly keep writin .. ! ! Also If you get a chance Id love to know what you think about some of my poetry maybe and get some feedback from ya .. It would mean bunches .. LOL .. Hope to hear form you soon ! TTYL
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  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    A very good one! =) Loved it. Take care and keep writing!

    ~Grace