this one is a very beautiful and thoughtful poem.Keep them coming

Wow, that was very inspiring and also the flow was very good, especially in the beginning. Keep on writing.
SatuzKa

Wow that was really well written, and I love the moral of the poem. Wow that was a very good connection you made. Just wow, I've never thought of that that way. Awesome, thought-provoking poem! Keep it up!

Beautifully written. Interestingly defines human reaction. Well done.

WOW!! Great thing to write about! And it sounded nice and everything. Please continue the great writing! Great Job!

nice i like how you ryme every thing i cant do that so i don't try

wow, that was a great poem! you are such a great poet. i hope to see more from you. 5/5

Well-written and spiritually insightful.
-Kate

Wonderfully written. Adding you to my favorites!

wow, very well written poem. And it's so true!!! I know that I do that sometimes, and my adam does it too... well written, I love reading poems that I can relate to... I gave it 5! :D

very intresting, short but i loved reading it
well done

good one!thnx for da comment

An amazing poem! Your poems are always so very well written! I think you are a great poet one of the best on this site! I always enjoy your poems!
Take Care! Brooke

I posted a new one today would love an honest opinion. I wrote it about my childhood. Thanx!

really good. good job

What can I say about you Michael..I have yet to have a chance to speak with you, but surely, it was destined for me to come across your poetry. Very divine, very Honest and very determined. You write like a genious, and I thought I was good!
5/5 for one who deserves it. ( and trust me...I rarely comment, unless its worth reading...)
Great Job,
and God Bless...
Hina~

Wow, that is really good. I never thought someone would write a poem about Adam and Eve. Excellent write. >3jess

well done

Jacs
xxx

as always,lovely poem!than you so much for all your comments on mine,they make the harsher comments a little softer!I wish you only the best in all you do,ta da for now,britt.

i like this good job. really its great!! 5/5! keep writing.

i like this good job. really its great!! 5/5! keep writing.